Chapter 196
He admitted it directly, and the corners of his mouth curled up unconsciously.
This sentence made everyone stand in awe.
The experienced girls knew how strong the malice in "Summer Return" and "Steins;Gate" was.
Now it seems that it might be even higher than that!
"Senior is so scary~!"
Isshi Iroha said without any acting.
271 Arrangement of comics and novels
Just when the discussion atmosphere of the new work was in full swing. The sequel to "Steins;Gate", the previous work of "Tsukiro Mami", was gradually getting on track.
Although it is not a complete sequel to "Tsukiro Mami", it is his script, which may reduce some readers, but it will not have a big impact.
The fame of "Kashiwagi Eri" is no longer as good as "Tsukiro Mami", but the potential traffic in the comics industry is more than that of the light novel industry, so after a period of publicity, "Steins;Gate 0" soon entered the top ten in the comic magazine where it was serialized, and continued to improve with the passage of time.
"Hachiman, how's the rhythm of this chapter?"
After finishing a new chapter of the comic, Eriri communicated with him through video.
"Okay, you have gradually grasped the rhythm."
After reading it, Hikigaya Hachiman gave a simple evaluation.
The experience of being a comic book artist, apart from fame, does not provide much help to the girl, especially when drawing a serious comic book.
So at the beginning, the girl's grasp of the plot has always been insufficient, and it is difficult to control it freely. Of course, he, the guest original author, has to provide guidance.
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Although he has never drawn comics, he has a high accuracy in grasping the plot. After a little adaptation, he found the right rhythm to teach the other party.
"Great, I thought I would never change... I would not have drawn comic books if I had known."
Eri wiped the sweat from her forehead.
The former reliance has become an obstacle for her, which gives her a headache.
"Fortunately, Hachiman helped me, otherwise, I feel that I will never be able to fulfill my dream."
She straightened her voice.
"It's too early to say that now. It's not that easy for you to create a satisfying comic by yourself."
Hikigaya Hachiman said alertly.
"Ah, I got carried away without paying attention! Ahem, I still have a long way to go! Next, I need to learn more about story creation from you, Hachiman. Please continue to spur me on!"
Eri's expression changed instantly. She has always been very serious in this regard.
"Well, let's talk about how to create a character that is annoying but acceptable to others today."
He nodded.
One night a few days later.
"Hey, teacher, if I had known earlier, I would have gone to a university in Chiba. The effect of personal guidance should be better, right?"
Sitting at the desk, facing the computer, Kasumigaoka Utaha sighed.
"No, there is no difference at all. It depends mainly on one's understanding."
Listening to her joke, Hikigaya Hachiman denied her statement.
"Look, isn't Mr. Yamada's progress not as great as yours? We are together every day."
What he meant was that the master leads the way, but the practice is up to the individual.
"We are together every day... hum!"
However, Kasumigaoka Utaha understood another meaning from his expression.
Is he inviting people to eat dog food?
Consider the feelings of the female apprentice!
"So, when will your new work be released? It has been delayed for a long time, your readers should be impatient, right?"
Hikigaya Hachiman instantly changed the subject.
"I have wanted to write a new novel for a long time, but every time I finish the outline, I delete it in the end. There is no way. When I see the works of Mr. Ke'er and Mr. Chishou, I lose interest..."
Kasumigaoka Utaha replied lazily while stirring the spoon in the coffee cup with one hand.
"Really, how can there be such a genius in the world? It is unbearable! Damn it, I really want to surpass you!"
The girl's ears were filled with resentment.
"So, do you want to continue polishing?"
He said 'hmm'.
"No, I don't need it."
The girl shook her head again.
"It is impossible to succeed with only theory and no practice. This is the limit of what I can achieve at this stage. I'd better write a work first, so that I can see more of my shortcomings."
"Then I wish your new work will sell well."
"Arigato, teacher."
...
As the season enters summer, the weather is gradually getting hotter, and everyone's dress is gradually becoming cooler.
"Tick-tock, tick-tock..."
Unexpectedly, it suddenly rained before I went out today.
"Hey, all of you take your umbrellas, don't play the same tricks on me again!"
Yamada Fairy warned with a pointed look.
"You are too nosy, Ajin."
Senjumura Sei responded.
"It's rare that it starts to rain in the morning, senior, let's go to school together with an umbrella."
Kari Nayuta had already rushed over at this time, hugging his arm and acting coquettishly.
"Let's separate. I've become the public enemy of the school. I'm afraid if I continue to provoke people like this, someone will come after me and kill me."
Hikigaya Hachiman shook his head numbly.
In the school, a certain rumor has become everyone's consensus. Now he is a scumbag who plays with girls' hearts, and there is a risk of being slapped.
Although he admitted that he was stepping on a few boats, he really didn't play with girls' hearts, and he really planned to be responsible to the end!
All this is slander from those people!
"It does sound possible to become a reality... This must be a problem for some people. They don't behave themselves all day long and get close to someone else's fiancé!"
Yamada Fairy spread his hands, half-opened one eye, and teased.
"It's so pathetic to be obsessed with your own fantasies, demi-human."
Qian Shou Village's Zheng looked at her with contempt.
But Nayuta suddenly thought of something and fell silent.
After the goblin had quarreled with the village for a while.
"It's time to go... If you are late again because of this kind of thing, you won't be able to punch in enough."
Hikigaya Hachiman observed Nayuta, then looked away and said.
It seemed to be because of the weather, the gloomy sky outside made the atmosphere in the club a bit dull.
At the fifth watch, Liuli looked left and right, but stopped talking.
Qian Shou Cun Zheng is still immersed in his work as always.
Saori Makishima reads novels like an outsider.
The problem is obviously...
night.
Hikigaya Hachiman took advantage of the goblin to cook dinner in the kitchen and sneaked in to talk to her about it.
"Huh? You're saying that there's something wrong with Nayuta's condition?"
Tapping his chin with his finger, the Yamada fairy looked thoughtful.
"Is it possible that girls will have this every month..."
he suddenly proposed.
"It's not impossible..."
Miss Goblin blushed.
"However, we still need to pay more attention to Mr. Crab's condition next."
"Um."
272 A magical girl who fits the stereotype?
After answering the last big question, the brown-haired girl sitting in the classroom turned the penholder with her right hand, looking absent-minded.
"Hurry up, I really want tomorrow to come soon!"
Kosaka Kirino was very anxious at the moment.
Today is Friday, the last day of exams, and tomorrow is the day when "Puella Magi Madoka Magica" is released.
Among many people, her expectations must be the highest. After all, apart from her, no one she knows still cares about magical girls.
After all, in the eyes of most people, it is a very childish work.
Of course, her requirements are also the highest!
She has basically read all the magical girl-themed works in recent years without missing a single one. With her understanding of magical girls, it can be said that no one can match her.
"So, what will the magical girl written by Teacher Tsukoshi look like?"
Kosaka Kirino thought with expectation.
But after thinking about it, her expression became much more solemn, so that after school, Aragaki Ayase had a misunderstanding when he saw her expression.
"Kirino, your expression is a little ugly. Is it because you didn't perform well in the exam?"
"No, the exam is very simple. I can handle it casually. What I'm worried about is tomorrow..."
Kosaka Kirino shook his head repeatedly.
"Are you worried that Hikigaya-senpai's new work will be ignored? But I don't think so. Senior is very confident. With his current status in the industry, he shouldn't make mistakes in judgment, right?"
Aragaki Ayase's eyes flashed.
"I'm not worried about this. What I'm worried about is Teacher Yueze's unique interpretation... I'm afraid it will exceed my expectations."
Kosaka Kirino said with rapid breathing.
Because she had been fooled twice, and each time was more painful than the last, she had to be wary.
"Indeed, you need to be mentally prepared to read Teacher Yuese's novels..."
For a moment, Aragaki Ayase recalled the fear of being dominated, and her heart trembled.
In the early morning, when the sky is still bright.
"Dong dong dong."
Arriving on the second floor, Sayuri Sawamura knocked on her daughter's door, but found no one responded.
"Yinglili, I'm coming in."