Chapter 11

After reading all the private messages, she happened to be free recently and thought of this.

As a professional with a sense of smell, although for different reasons, Eriri also paid attention to Eromanga's illustrations at the first time.

"The painting is very good, but some places are still a little immature..."

She was not too surprised. Such illustrations are beautiful, but they are nothing in her eyes.

Compared with illustrations, her expectations are completely placed on the plot of "Summer Reappearance"...

"Shinnei, close your eyes."

"Okay, open them... I'll give you a gift."

"Shinnei, you have to find me."

"You have to protect Mio."

The story of "Summer Reappearance" begins with a confusing conversation.

Online loan Shinpei woke up from such a dream, opened his eyes, and was already close to his hometown, Ridu Island.

Because he flirted with an older sister, he was slapped and woke up, and he embarked on an incredible journey.

First, she learned about the mysterious shadow disease from Mio, leaving a suspense and foreshadowing for the story, and then she was shot by Shadow Mio without knowing anything, officially opening the prelude to the story.

Shadow Mio's decisive shot even made Eriri, who was reading, exclaim, and the figure lying on the sofa stood up.

"Ah, so decisive? Is the plot developing so fast?"

Now her mind is like a ball of thread tangled together, and she can't wait to sort out all the threads again. With such an impulse, she re-entered the state of reading.

Time goes back, and the online loan Shinpei returns to the past. He quickly figured out the situation and began to pay attention to clues that he had not discovered before, thinking about different directions and considering various possibilities. This sense of anxiety increased the sense of substitution.

Unfortunately, in the second reincarnation, he was frustrated again because of an unexpected phone call.

The sense of despair is superimposed twice.

"Could it be a depressing genre?"

This style made Eriri a little uncomfortable. She preferred works that were more refreshing, but she couldn't help but look down in her eager pursuit of the truth.

Three times is the limit. Once again, the online loan Shinpei learned his lesson and not only recorded the shadow's story, but also told his friends.

At this moment, Chao, who was originally dead, appeared in front of him.

"Oh!"

This was Eriri's first reaction.

The heroine appeared! The focus is still childhood sweethearts!

But she soon reacted.

"Didn't Chao die before? Could it be that the dead person was the shadow? Or is this guy the shadow? I really don't understand."

Eriri had a headache, but she quickly reacted.

You will know if you look down!

The answer was soon revealed. The Chao in front of him was indeed a shadow, a special shadow.

"So it was just a fake?"

Eriri pouted.

Then they are not real childhood sweethearts!

But soon she was attracted by this cute shadow tide. Although it was a shadow, it also inherited the advantages of the original.

She held her breath and watched the desperate scene at the end of the volume.

"Fuck, the memory reading trick is too bad! This villain is too strong! And he can think of a way to deal with it."

Eri was stunned.

With such a writing style, are you sure you don't want to kill the protagonist? This is too difficult, right?

But even in such a situation, she still has hope.

After all, the protagonist is still the protagonist. If the story wants to continue, something unexpected will inevitably happen.

Sure enough, the next moment, the heroic big sister made a brilliant appearance!

The rescue was successful!

The story just happened to be interrupted here.

It does not end with a desperate ending, but with a brand new hope. This gives a lot of expectations and can also make readers feel less depressed.

But the overall story still gives people a feeling of depression.

After reading it, Eriri decisively logged on to the website and issued her own sharp comments.

19 skills: God's Eye!

Childhood sweethearts are the best in the world: The time loop setting is a difficult setting to write, so there are few in the industry. I like this story very much. The setting of the shadow disease is also good, which makes the story diverse. As for some shortcomings, it is understandable considering that the author is a newcomer. The most important thing is that Chao is very cute, I like it very much! Although it is a shadow, it seems to be on the side of the protagonist group. It is rare to see this type of work. I hope the author can continue to work hard next time. As long as the level of the opening can be maintained, it will be fine. In addition, urge for more updates! Please update the second volume as soon as possible! I can't wait!

Eri is very anxious, because the update speed in the industry is unpredictable. If it is a new work, it will be a little more diligent, generally updating one volume every three or four months. If it is in the middle and late stages, some people will write new works, and it is very likely that they will be separated by more than half a year!

At this time, it is possible to urge the author to submit the manuscript, because when a new artist just debuts, the desire to create is the strongest. When he becomes an old man, he will be so lazy that he will be so lazy. It is useless to urge him to submit the manuscript, even if he sends a razor blade.

However, her account was not specially certified as "Kashiwagi Eri", so this comment was quickly drowned in the comment area and was not seen by Hikigaya Hachiman.

...

Everything is moving in a good direction. Although the increase in sales has entered a long-term stage and is far from the results created by Ms. Yamada, Hikigaya Hachiman is already satisfied.

Because everyone's evaluation is very good, even if they think there is a problem, they will use encouraging words.

What does this show?

This shows that perhaps because of the audience problem, "Summer Reappearance" has not received enough attention, but the quality of the work itself is not bad. If there is an opportunity to increase exposure in the future, such as animation, it may have the possibility of an explosion.

This is thanks to the fact that the story of "Summer Reappearance" is great. Otherwise, it would be difficult for him, with ordinary talent and only good writing skills, to achieve such results at the beginning.

Without failures, it would be difficult to succeed.

Therefore, under such pressure, he must grasp this luck and make his own ability worthy of such an excellent story one day.

At that time, he can be regarded as a truly powerful writer.

Spring vacation, two or three days left.

After paying attention to the sales a few times, Hachiman Hikigaya stopped caring about it and focused on the second volume of Summer Reappearance.

In fact, he is not just considering the content of the second volume now. He has been thinking about it and describing it for some time.

His goal is to keep the same speed of updating one volume every three months as Ms. Yamada. In the online serialization, this speed is definitely not good, but in the light novel industry, this speed is basically first-class. Except for those who update several books at the same time, few people can compare with it.

Just when he was busy, Ms. Yamada suddenly sent a message.

Yamada Fairy: Why didn't you tell me!

Me: ? ? ? Ms. Yamada, what are you talking about.

Yamada Fairy: Are you playing dumb? Stupid Hikigaya, isn't your "Summer Return" on sale?

Me: So that's what you're talking about.

Me: So why did you specifically tell Miss Yamada?

"Of course..."

Yamada Fairy was stunned, and hesitated to speak.

It seemed that there was really no reason to say it.

This situation actually happened because of the difference in their personalities, and the girl quickly figured it out.

One is lively and cheerful, likes to share his joy, and the other is more introverted.

Yamada Fairy: Okay, there really is no reason.

Me: Apart from that, does Miss Yamada have any other ideas? I don't think you just came to me for this matter.

Yamada Fairy: To be honest, I have a new respect for you.

"Oh?"

Hikigaya Hachiman saw this and sat up straight, his eyes became serious.

He thought that it might take a long time before he could see Miss Yamada speak like this, but he didn't expect it to come so soon.

Of course, this is definitely not a sign of giving up.

I saw Yamada Fairy typing again: I can tell from the work how much effort you put into it. In order to modify the first volume to what it is now, you must have deleted and revised it more than once or twice, right?

Me: You can see all this?

Yamada Fairy: Of course, I have the B-level skill "God's Eye". I can see through the essence of the work as long as I read it once, including what kind of person you are. It is reflected in my heart through the lines!

"Hehe."

Hikigaya Hachiman was happy when he saw it.

Me: Miss Yamada, you are not yet at the age of Chuunibyou, right? I kindly remind you that this is reality, not a game.

Yamada Fairy: I am not a Chuunibyou! Don't believe it! Anyway, I am optimistic about you, Hikigaya, you may be someone who can stand shoulder to shoulder with me in the future! In the future, I will wait for you on the highest throne!

Me: It is an honor to be recognized by Miss Yamada.

"Don't you feel embarrassed typing this, Ms. Yamada?"

Hikigaya Hachiman's mouth twitched.

But to be honest, that thing called 'God's Eye' is certainly not a game skill, but it is also a real thing. It is obviously a talent that Ms. Yamada described in an abstract form, a special talent that only geniuses have.

According to Ms. Yamada's setting, it is estimated that ordinary people like him, in addition to a slightly stronger memory ability, must have all D-level skills, right?

Maybe I overestimated myself.

Walk out of the bedroom.

"Komachi, I'm going out to buy a bottle of Coke. Do you want me to bring something?"

Hikigaya Hachiman passed by the sofa, glanced at his sister who was leaning on the sofa reading a book, and took the initiative to speak.

"Two bags of potato chips, please, Onii-chan~!"

Komachi grinned, her beautiful little canine teeth were dazzlingly white.

After walking out of the gate, Hikigaya Hachiman was about to walk to the street next to him, and then he noticed a moving company truck parked next to him.

"Is this a new neighbor?"

He looked questioning.

That's right, the neighbor's family has moved two or three months ago, and it's normal for someone to move in at this time.

I don't know what the new neighbor is like?

Soon, Hikigaya Hachiman threw this boring idea behind his head.

Normally, even if it's a neighbor, you won't be very familiar with him, as long as he's not the weirdo who plays music late at night.

20 New Neighbor

After thinking about a plot in the second volume of "Summer Returns" for a long time, he felt a little tired. After shopping and returning home, Hikigaya Hachiman did not go into the room, but chose to sit on the sofa, ready to chat with his sister for a while and relax.

"Here, Komachi, the chips you asked for are all your favorite flavors."

He handed over two bags of chips.

"Thank you, Onii-chan."

Komachi happily took it, then took out a piece of change from his pocket and smiled, "This is for Onii-chan's errand fee."

"No need, who wants this from you? As a brother, isn't this a matter of course?"

After saying that, he raised his finger and then said something familiar, "Ah, I said this very well."

"Yeah! This sentence scored very high in Komachi's heart!"