Answer a Recent Question From a Book Friend!

Recently, some book friends have commented that the duel between the supporting characters was too long, making the protagonist look like a passerby.

This is my problem, so in the future, as long as the supporting character duel is not too important, I will not write such a long one.

My problem is that I wanted to portray the strength of the supporting characters, but it seemed like I did too much. It should be done slowly. I want to achieve success in one stroke every time, which seems a bit unrealistic. I will change this later.

But there is a duel next, which may still look like this, because it is a saved manuscript (dog head).

So I didn’t change it, so I could only forgive it. Of course, you can jump and watch if you want. I’ve been doing too much lately.

Xingfeng here wants to say sorry to everyone! ! !

In the future duel process, I will also write the insertion of passers-by better. As much as possible, the duel person says it, and then inserts it appropriately.

But don’t expect my writing to be too good. I’m only half-a-dozen, so I can only learn and change slowly. I hope book friends can understand me.

As for other issues, you can ask them in the comments and I will work hard to adjust them.

I hope you can continue to support this book and support Xingfeng! ! !

Finally, Xingfeng shamelessly asked for recommendation votes, monthly passes, and subscriptions. I would be even happier if I had a full subscription, and of course it would be best if there was a reward (dog head).

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