Chapter 704 Mutual Evaluation: BA (III)

Chapter 704 Mutual Evaluation: B→A (3)

"For example, in the two scenes between Liang Susu and Liang Xing, I was thinking at first that if Liang Xing was placed in the fifth position, maybe the audience would be able to have a deeper understanding of the father who worked hard to earn money to support the family and suddenly learned that his daughter had jumped from a building. The mood of the tragedy of suicide. Then the story of Liang Susu is placed at the end to further show her mental journey until she finally collapsed and committed suicide, which may make the arrangement of the whole work more reasonable. "

"Yes, I have hesitated like this." Fang Youwen nodded.

He explained: "But later I decided to use the structure of undulating lines instead of straight lines. If it ended with Liang Susu jumping off the building, the emotional advancement would be too high and too violent, and it would appear 'unreal', which would be too much. The sensation of the world.”

"That's it." Qu Nan immediately understood Fang Youwen's intention.

"Ups and downs line" and "straight line" are common terms used by Qin Jue in teaching. Literally understood, they are to quantify plot rhythm and emotional development into numerical curves.

The undulating line refers to the alternation of ups and downs, and the lines are relatively smooth, while the straight line is divided into straight up and straight down, with more obvious "nodes" and relatively sharp.

Generally speaking, good film and television works need to be relaxed and relaxed, so these two terms are just a rough division from a large framework, and the meaning is enough.

For example, "The Crucible" has an ups and downs in the early and middle stages, but it goes straight up from the beginning of the courtroom plot until the character "Qin" breaks down emotionally, and then continues with a transition where Qin kills other children. , and finally went straight up again, ending at the point where Qin killed Dean Zhang Mu's revenge, and exploded heartily.

If you draw it on a graph, you can easily see that the overall trend in the second half of "The Crucible" is upward, and the trend is steep.

But in "Embarrassed", Fang Youwen adopts the undulating line of "Xu→Liu→Li→Chen→↑Liang Susu↑↑Liang Xing→↓", placing the intense parts in the middle and later sections, and finally ending with a gentle ending. It creates a sense of lamentation in the depression and dullness of "a bolt from the blue but helplessness".

"Of course, this arrangement also has shortcomings." Fang Youwen reflected on himself, "Looking at the overall situation, it will make Liang Susu's story more sharp and sharp. Although it has taken over the changes of Li Zhang and Chen Shufang, it will easily give the audience a preconceived impression. Amplify their likes and dislikes, but if I were given another chance, I would still choose to deal with it.”

His attitude was very calm. Qu Nan nodded while listening, with a "taught" look on his face.

Seeing the AD (the Assistant Director) of the program team raising a handwritten sign on the side of the stage to indicate that the time was almost up, Qu Nan put away what he still wanted to say and handed over the topic to the next person. in hand.

Clothing and makeup are two industries that both belong to the makeup industry. Strictly speaking, they are not very separate. The situation has changed from one-to-one to many-to-many.

Wu Ang and Cong Ning'an from Group B chatted with Gu Wensong, Liu Chen and Yue Shishi from Group A on the stage.

"Teacher, can you see a personal photo?" Wu Ang raised his hand.

"We've really troubled the backstage teachers." Gu Wensong chuckled.

As he was talking, the big screen was divided into many small pieces, like a photo wall. From Xu Xiaoman to Liang Xing, there were several photos of each character.

"I've wanted to say it for a long time." Wu Ang had wailed in the chat group of Entertainment Class 1 when the full version of "Embarrassed" was released, "Teacher Gu! Stop it! What you're doing is no longer makeup, but a hair change. "

As soon as she said this, everyone laughed immediately, and the host Lin Yuqin's "haha" laughter could even be faintly heard from the sidelines.

"He is indeed the top guy in the makeup team on our show, isn't he?"

Another makeup artist in Group A, Liu Chen, looked even prouder than Gu Wensong himself, "Teacher Gu is really awesome! Xingliang's acting skills are also awesome. Anyway, I still can't contact Xingliang and Liang Xing." These two people..."

She made everyone laugh again, but there was deep admiration in the laughter.

Among the characters in "Awkward", Xu Shuangshuang and Liu Zhe are both young men and women just like their characters. Similarly, Li Zhi and Chen Danqing are both incompatible in age and appearance. Although Su Su and The Liang Susu she plays is very different, but it is not difficult to play the role of a high school student in terms of height and body shape. Only Nie Xingliang is extremely conspicuous in this.

This guy has a baby face!

At this time, the director very effectively cut the big screen into two parts. On one side was Nie Xingliang, who looked like a fresh actor with a tender face and a smile. On the other side was Liang Xing, a delivery boy with rough, dark skin and an old face with deep nasolabial folds. .

The contrast was so stark that there was an uproar in the audience.

You can't tell it's a person at all!

"little monster."

Qin Jue, who was sitting in Group B, looked at Nie Xingliang and laughed and cursed in a low voice without holding a microphone.

Although everyone in the cast of "Entertainment Intern" is ranked high or low, if you really quantify their strength, many people are actually on the same level.

Among the actor interns who play male roles, she, Liu Zhe, Nie Xingliang, and Ding Mingqian, these four have already vaguely formed the upper circle.

Originally, Qin Jue was the one who took the lead and was criticized by Liu Zhe and Ding Mingqian for being too juicy. Now Nie Xingliang jumped up and rushed forward.

Take the character Liang Xing as an example. Although Gu Wensong's makeup skills are very scary, if Nie Xingliang's acting skills are not up to par, there will still be a strong sense of dissonance.

But he still held on.

Although there are some flaws, it is already a very scary improvement.

"I also want to say something about the costumes..."

Over there, Cong Ningan from Group B and Yue Shishi from Group A talked about some issues with the styling.

Yue Shishi is a shy girl. Although it is the sixth round, she still blushes and gets nervous in front of the camera. She humbly said that she was following Fang Youwen's requirements, and everyone's roles were close to real life, so it was very convenient to choose and design the costumes.

Cong Ningan smiled and said, "No way, Li Zhanghe's several sets of clothes and Liang Xing's takeaway clothes show that they have put a lot of effort."

He asked the director to call up a few pictures, and combined with the explanation, many viewers made sounds of sudden enlightenment.

[Wow, there are so many tricks... The sixth round of mutual comments is great! ]

[It turns out that Li Zhang's tie knot is a work of art. I didn't expect it to be so detailed]

[I think the most amazing thing is the "pajamas that were washed a little white by his wife". This little detail is so touching...]

[Liang Xing's delivery uniform is ill-fitting because he was intentional]

[Thinking about it carefully, he has very little sleep every day and is always delivering food outside. His body will collapse and he will lose weight]

[Alas, I suddenly feel a little emotional. It's really that fatherly love is used in the wrong place. It's so sad]

[Don't mention it. Liu Chen also has a set of makeup. Xu Shuangshuang looks very heroic, but Xu Xiaoman is a very common female white-collar image. She is also gentle and cute]

[Yes, yes, and Liang Susu's dusty face is also made up very well]

[But I have to say that Gu Wensong is really strong. The makeup for Chen Shufang's swollen face and Liang Susu's allergic pustules looks like the real thing. It's amazing...]

[Off topic, the barrage finally stopped arguing. I breathed a sigh of relief. The long debate before was too scary, and the font was small and dense, ugh]

[Friendly reminder: You can check "Wide barrage is invisible"]

[Well, the main thing is that some people don't post the side wide barrage with many words and small fonts, but have to post a long string of words at the top or bottom, and block the subtitles, which is very annoying]

[Can the top and bottom be blocked?]

[It is recommended to adjust the transparency or simply turn it off for a while, that's what I do]

[Okay, props, after watching the interview of "Zong Entertainment", I found that Mr. Feng Yuzhi has a lot of ideas for designing props]

[And he is also very handsome (dog head]

[What happened before, is our Uncle Qiao's mature charm not enough (dog head]

The atmosphere on the official website barrage and other platforms has gradually become much calmer due to the friendly discussions on the stage. After the exchange of several people in the makeup group, it is now Feng Yuzhi from Group A and Qiao Yuansu and Zhu Xi from Group B who are chatting.

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