Chapter 557 Teaching

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Time to enter August. ~follow~dream~little~say~щ~sui

After the words "The Struggle of the Fool", the direction of the story exceeded many readers' expectations.

Glid completely occupied Yao Lin's body, and the situation showed a one-sided trend. Brother Elric was also subdued by Enwei and Glatoni. At this critical moment, Scarman Scar and Zhang Mei entered the basement in order to find the little panda Xiaomei, and met the artificial man and Elric brothers.

The artificial man fought fiercely with Scar and Xiaomei, and the Elric brothers took advantage of the chaos to regain their freedom. At the same time, Edward also discovered one thing—Xiaomei and Scar could use "alchemy".

Taking advantage of the confusion, Edward also told Scar the truth about the "Ishwar Rebellion", that is, Envihua turned into an officer and shot and killed the little girl.

The war was about to break out, but the Elric brothers and others were not opponents of the artificial man. Zhang Mei and Xiaomei hid in Al's armor, but after the two brothers were captured, they were sent to the headquarters and confessed to Bradley Bugong had a conversation, and Scar, who escaped from the sewer, accidentally met Dr. Margo who was locked up by the artificial man...

Every episode of "Steel Refining" is updated, and the plot will progress to varying degrees. As commented on the Internet, this comic has almost no waste plots.

Unknowingly, the chapter of "Smelting Steel" finally involved one of the two greatest tragedies-"Ishwar Rebellion".

This war is a war of unequal strength. Let alone the powerful firepower of Amistoris, the national alchemist it possesses completely tilts the balance of this war.

Familiar faces appeared one after another.

Hughes, Lisa, Roy, Armstrong, and in the second half of the comics, "The Alchemist of the Red Lotus" Kim Burly...

At the same time, Wen Li's parents, the Rockbell couple who have been helping the Ishwar people, also appeared in the screen.

In the last two weeks of August, "Smelting Steel" officially narrated the war, and the plot that had been slightly stretched became tense again. At the same time, the cruelty of the war was also bloodily displayed on the paper.

This was a war of annihilation, and Armestorius massacred the Ishwar people, almost exterminating their genocide.

The discussion on the Internet about the "Ishwar Rebellion" has never stopped since the "footsteps of annihilation".

Since this episode is a memory,

Readers already know in advance how things will turn out. Therefore, when seeing this plot, many people can't bear to read it, otherwise, the feeling of depression will come to their hearts when reading this plot.

Whether it is "ic

"Future" is still a small book in the hot list, and "Smelting Steel" has a tendency to decline, being surpassed by "King of Rock and Roll" and "Age of the Gods" respectively.

However, cartoonists and readers who have seen this plot are in another mood.

Tragedy is the destruction of valuable things in life for others to see.

The more tragic, the more cruel, the more memorable it is, and at the same time, it also deepens the depth and connotation of the story.

This is a double-edged sword, both good and bad.

For the drop in ranking, Shen Xin was also well prepared.

Just like the disappearance of Zuo Wei, although the ranking of "Soul of Chess" almost collapsed, but looking back now, if Zuo Wei hadn't disappeared, "Soul of Chess" might not be so memorable.

Of course, although the "Ishwar Rebellion" is a tragedy, its impact on the work is far less than Zuo Wei's disappearance. The reason for this is that the sense of substitution is different.

In "Soul of Chess", Zuo Wei is equivalent to the status of the second male protagonist. The civil strife in Ishbal is different. There are only a handful of people who are named, and, except for Scar, there are not many people who died. Readers The emotions invested in these characters are naturally not as good as Zuo Wei.

Just seeing such a plot, inner depression is inevitable.

Shen Xin didn't care about this, after this episode, the ranking of "Smelting Steel" will naturally go up.

Before I knew it, at night, my aunt returned home after finishing supper, and Xi Muhan led Lu Ning to the studio.

As soon as he went up to the second floor, Xi Muhan couldn't wait to say, "Brother Xin, Sister Yan said that the little book "Ding Shi" won the seventh place."

"Really? That's amazing!" Shen Xin nodded slightly when she saw Lu Ning behind Xi Muhan, "Teacher Lu, in "ic

"future" is serialized, how do you feel? "

Lu Ning smiled wryly, "Master, you said that, didn't you just piss me off?"

In the comics industry, assistants are basically equivalent to apprentices of cartoonists.

"You suddenly called me master, I feel so old." Shen Xin waved his hand, he thought he was young.

Lu Ning rolled her eyes, this kind of matter is not in her hands.

Having said that, what Shen Xin said is correct, after all, he is really too young.

"Then call the teacher first?" ic

future"... I can only say that the pressure is very high. "Lu Ning sighed, "When I was in "Girls Century", I always felt relaxed, and I could get the first place. In "ic

"future", the most advanced one is the 5th in the first episode, the 6th in the last episode, and the 7th in this episode, every episode feels like it is going backwards. "

"This is normal." Shen Xin comforted, ""Soul of Chess" was first published in "ic

It was serialized on "future", and the results were not stable, but at this time, we must hold on to our mentality. As I said before, because it is serialized, the creator's mentality will definitely fluctuate with the readers' feedback. As for the plot of the story, you have to make timely adjustments. "

"Ah? How to adjust? No... Didn't you say that you have to stick to your own point of view?"

"This can be divided into two situations. First, readers' opinions should not be influenced too much, but poisonous points must be avoided; second, the ranking of small books is very important, sometimes even more important than the sales of single volumes. After the 16th place, be prepared to cut it at any time. Therefore, the drawing of na must be fully communicated with sister Yan, but do not draw too long na, at most two or three words, so that it can be changed at any time... Xiaohan , you have no experience, these are actually for you. Don't take it for granted, you must discuss it with Sister Yan more."

"Ah?" Xi Muhan was taken aback for a moment, then nodded, "Got it!"

"Also, there must be an overall plan. Within a certain period of time, we must come up with different new ideas. The background of "Dingshi" is now, including molecular cuisine, the world's three major cuisines, and special dishes from some small places. Don't be too narrow-minded."

Lu Ning and Xiaohan's eyes lit up, they both focused on the domestic dishes and indeed forgot about the foreign delicacies.

"Another point is that the construction of the world view must be paved well, otherwise the sudden introduction of foreign dishes or characters will make the comics feel torn."

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