Chapter 47: Modification Ideas

"Don't rewrite the new script? What are you going to do?" Ji Yin asked in surprise.

Xi Muzhen looked at Shen Xin puzzled.

"For the sake of Xiao Zun, I will make an exception and express my thoughts. Aren't there four female characters in the first part? Among them, three girls are students, and one student is a teacher. Then pull out two characters from the following chapters. girls to form a club, and the only teacher who can act as an instructor."

"What's the difference between this and what Xiao Zun said?" Ji Yinxuan asked puzzled.

Xi Muzhen nodded again and again, she also wanted to know the difference between the two.

"Of course there is a difference. The purpose of creating clubs is different. What Xiaojun said was to create a club for the purpose of dating. They didn't know the protagonist before that. The club I said was for the purpose of competing for the male lead. They I've known the male lead from the beginning, everyone wants to date the male lead, but they don't want to give others a chance."

"Wait... If this is the case, the text written by Su Han can be applied to this framework. It is necessary to delete some characters and the content related to them, and then reorganize and add the branch tasks of the game." Ji Yinxuan suddenly realized , "In this way, it can indeed shorten the time for finishing the script. Shen Xin, you really have a better idea."

Xi Muzhen blinked his eyes, looking confused.

"Brother Xin's reformation is just to shorten the time to revise the script?"

"Of course it's more than that. The most important point of the method Shen Xin said is to let the players have a sense of substitution. The game we are making this time is a galgame, and the target players are boys. If it is the proposal you mentioned , A few outstanding girls formed a society because they had never been in a relationship, and then chose a boy as a love partner, if you were that boy, how would you feel?" Ji Yinxuan asked.

"Luck... this sense of luck should be passed on to the players, right?"

"That's right, it can be passed on to the player—yes, 'I' became her boyfriend because of luck. But at the same time, the 'player' may also have another idea, 'I' is an experiment. They came to me to try to fall in love, not for any other reason.

"Shen Xin's idea is not as worrying as this. The reason why so many beautiful girls form a club is because of 'me', and everything they do is to please 'me', so as to win 'me'. If you It's this boy, don't you feel different?"

Ji Yinxuan's cheeks were rosy, and her eyes shone brightly.

This is her biggest mood swing tonight, and the reason is that the game has a new idea.

Xi Muzhen nodded slowly, "It seems to be the case. There is indeed a sense of vanity in my heart. Brother Xin, why did you think of writing like this?"

Shen Xin rolled her eyes, I'm an internet writer anyway, although I'm only a third-rate writer, I still know the basics.

"In the script written by Su Han, the number of characters will be greatly reduced, and the events related to the characters can be kept as a branch of the game and spread on other characters." Shen Xin reminded Ji Yinxuan.

"That's right." Ji Yinxuan nodded again and again, "This is better than the method I mentioned. We only need to adjust the structure of the story, and we are making small-scale adjustments. It should be able to adjust the story in a month at most. Wait until the script is written. Okay, you come to set the characters again. In this way, I will go to the editor-in-chief and communicate with him about asking you to be the character set. If he disagrees, I will start with the loopholes in the contract.”

"Don't be so troublesome, right? It's just a few sketches, just don't tell them when the time comes." Shen Xin waved her hand.

"No!" Ji Yinxuan categorically denied Shen Xin's statement, "The character design is very important to the production of the game. I don't allow such an important character to be forced to move behind the scenes because of a loophole in the contract. And, to you, this fame is also very important, right?"

Shen Xin was silent.

For a cartoonist,

Fame is the guarantee of comic sales. Only by letting more people know your name can you have a chance to sell your comics.

"So, you don't need to worry about this matter, I will definitely arrange it properly." Ji Yinxuan did not give Shen Xin a chance to intervene, and directly finalized the matter, "But I am looking for cooperation with "New World" to negotiate, It may be necessary to delay a little bit, after all, the text has not yet come out, and it is not easy for me to negotiate."

Shen Xin nodded. After all, he decided to deny the cooperation with Ji Yinxuan after reading the script. Therefore, Ji Yinxuan's approach is better for both parties.

Seeing that Shen Xin and Ji Yinxuan had finalized the cooperation matters, only some details were left to be discussed, Xi Muzhen was a little anxious.

"Wait...Brother Xin, if you say that, am I useless?"

Huh?

Shen Xin and Ji Yinxuan looked at Xi Muzhen with puzzled expressions on their faces.

"It's just to delete a few characters, and then add the scenes of the deleted characters to other characters. Anyone can do these things, right?" Xi Muzhen was sullen.

Ji Yinxuan shook her head repeatedly.

"Of course not. What you just said is correct, because Xiao Su has never been in love, so she has not been successful in shaping the character. When facing the male protagonist, the demeanor and the tone of the speech are completely unable to grasp the feeling of being in love. ——The character is too sensible, it should have something to do with her being good at mystery novels.

"I need to reflect the content of love in the text. Character shaping also determines the character's image. As a cartoonist, Shen Xin should be able to understand how important characters are?"

Shen Xin nodded, although he knew that this would increase Xi Muzhen's workload a lot, but what Ji Yinxuan said was true.

"Really?" Xi Muzhen's eyes brightened again, and he was even a little happy in his heart.

"But the deliberation of the script is an iterative process. Sometimes a character may be remembered by readers because of a sentence. Therefore, I hope you can be prepared to change the script. But don't worry, I will also help Don't worry." Ji Yinxuan comforted her.

"I...no problem." Xi Muzhen clenched his fists, "I should... no, I can definitely write a good script. However, Brother Xin, before you mention those girls forming clubs for the purpose of 'competing for the male lead' At that time, I was thinking about a question, since the female protagonists all like the male protagonist, they should be enemies to each other, so why do they still want to form a club?"

"Eh?"

Shen Xin was taken aback for a moment, he just said it casually just now and never thought about this issue.

"Yes, I want to know too." Ji Yinxuan asked earnestly.

"Well..." Shen Xin wiped the sweat off her forehead, how would I know, I just thought it would be fun.

"Of course, there must be a reason..." Shen Xin's mind spun quickly.

"En." Xi Muzhen nodded, like a good student who listened carefully.

"For example...that's right!" Shen Xin snapped her fingers, "For example, because of the protagonist's affairs, they have repeatedly caused an uproar in the school. In order to ensure the safety of the school, the principal thinks that they can only form a club in a certain area. It’s better for other students.”

After finishing speaking, Shen Xin secretly admired herself for being able to recover the loophole in such a short period of time.

"Is that okay?" Xi Muzhen looked puzzled.

"No problem. Unless it's a reasoning game, other types, such as developmental games, can have small logical loopholes. The idea Shen Xin said seems to be a joke, but it can be used." Ji Yinxuan nodded. Said.

"Okay, that's it for today." Shen Xin stood up from the sofa, "The follow-up matters are your business. Before the script comes out, don't contact me again."

"That's right, it's already late, I should go back." Ji Yinxuan stood up and bowed slightly to Shen Xin and Xi Muzhen.

"Is your butler back?" Shen Xin asked.

"It doesn't matter, I'll just contact her. As for the contract, I respect your wishes. After a few days, I will bring the contract and explain the pros and cons clearly. If you feel that this is a kind of bondage, you don't have to sign it." , but it should be in your interest, and I will never default." When Ji Yinxuan just walked out the door, she said like two people.

Shen Xin nodded slightly, the contract is the guarantee of the interests of both parties, but some people really don't like to sign the contract, so Ji Yinxuan's question is really asking for their opinions.

"Since it's a business matter, why don't you sign a contract? If there is a problem, it's easy to talk about it." Shen Xin said.

"Okay, then we'll see you in a few days."

Shen Xin sent Ji Yinxuan outside the community, and didn't go home until Ji Yinxuan got into the car.